Be careful what you wish for. - Comments

cute update ive had that problem too

Hehe, that was an awesome show!
I acan see why they go through tooth paste like crazy. I'd do the same thing!
more soon??
xoxo, anotherMCRcrazedfan

***New Reader***

I like the idea of this. If I was Bob I wouldn't forgive Frank and Gerard for putting me in an insane asylum.

In the 3rd chapter there was some mixing up of the name. You said it was in Frank's pov but kept saying things like Frank and I but also Gerard and I so it's kind of confusing but it's kind of easy to make out

for are new
I think you mean our

I really like the idea of Gerard and Frank having to work at a strip club after being in the band for a while. I'm not sure I like the idea of Ray being murdered but it adds to the story so I haven't totally made up my mind yet. :P

*clicks subscribe*

poor guys awesome btw

humms...this one's sad...Ray...died....WAAA!!!
and Bob's in AN ASYLUM! *GASP!*

Well I still love it, and I\m still gunna sudbscire like I did the other, its really good ! BLAH! okay, see yah!

Wow...I can only just imagine what there show is going to look like *goes off in
fantasy land daydreaming*
more soon??
xoxo, anotherMCRcrazedfan

wow, i'm rather intrigued and i can't wait for more! i'm rather upset over ray...am i a freak for having smiled slightly at the mentionings that bob thought pete wentz did it?!....meh....i can't wait for more! {i already said that...man i'm such a loser!}

Oh my god, not Ray!

There were a few spelling mistakes in this story, such as your use of the word "are."

I understand that its difficult to figure out what homophone to use in a sentence.

When using the word "are" you would use it in this way:
"When are you going to eat?" or "Where are you?"

The homophone of that word is "our" which would be used like this:
"Where is our phone?" or "Ray was our best friend."

Other than the few spelling errors, this story is very good and unique. I can't wait for more!

This is very interesting!!
But...RAY...NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
Not beautiful Ray-Ray!!
More soon??

they work at a strip club?
:D i'd deffinently pay to go see them!!
but this is really good and I cant wait for the update!!
xoxo, anotherMCRcrazedfan

No not Ray!! *tears*
this is really good so keep up the good work!!
*subscribes*
update when you can!!
xoxo, anotherMCRcrazedfan

dude its awesome so far

I have subscribed.
I like the description.
Interesting.
Update soon, please
bye...&& thanks...

OOH!!! I steal this stories virginity... hehe
*subscribes*
This is really intense so far. is it going to be like a john lennon death? Crazed fan kills Ray? hha.. coolio.

i cant wait for more of this! <3 =]