Find Your Love - Comments

heart..BROKEN!
This was so great though <333

oh my god. I loved this.
<3
you need to write more, silly.
'Cause it's always AMAZING.
Plus it puts my stuff to shame.

Well first and for most thanks for entering the contest and i'm glad that you got your entry in =)

I enjoyed this read and I liked how the main character was male and not female. It was the guy who got hurt and not the girl. That's a little more rare to see on here so I enjoyed the change of rolls. I liked how the two guys did not get into a fight over her but more or less were able to talk like human beings and state that she was no good for both of them. Now there were a few tense errors and you were missing prepositions in some places, so I had to do a double take on some sentences to understand them. I would suggest to just re-read it and just edit it slightly. Over all I thought this was well written and I enjoyed the fact that you talked about ballet and a dance move.

Once again thanks for entering and the winners should be posted soon.