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Hi! I really liked this a lot. You're truly a wonderful writer. The only real critique I have is just a grammar issue: you switch back and forth between present and past tense. It's a really easy, and really common mistake. But the next time you go back and edit, I suggest you pick one and stick with it.

Other than that, this was absolutely wonderful. I love Taylor Swift and Lautner, and I found this story on the Story Pimping Thread. Job well done!

I love this (i know this comment is short but at least I commented

I'm very curious as to where this is going to eventually lead to. I can't wait for an update :)

I really love the idea of this. I always wandered what really went down.. and this is really realistic. Can`t wait for the next chapter

I was sorta a fan of them dating but eh. Anyway, its really good! cannot wait for more!!

Love it :) Can't wait for the next chapter!

I like how you are putting it into a two person point of view. The fact Joe is probably going to be an obstacle in this is intreging. I am going to subscribe because this seems like it will go far. :]

This is a wonderful story you've got going on here :)
I absolutely love it, already.
As the person above me said, I like how introduced Ashley into the story.
It made me giggle a bit haha :)
Can't wait to read more :)
Update soon please!

This was fantastic. I'm a fan of both Taylors I didn't really like them together though.

I like how you introduced Ashley, with the vampire line. And how you added Joe Jonas into the story.
And how Taylor reacts to him saying that he was on that boat once too.

This was a great first chapter, I can't wait to read more. :)

FIRST COMMENT!
Okay, I loved this! Even though I was never a big supporter of Taylor and Taylor dating, but I really liked this story so far. I am a huge Taylor Lautner fan. :) Can't wait for more!
Subscribing!!