Temet Nosce - Comments

I've just caught up! So normally I wouldn't think the brief intervals of first person narrative would work and normally they don't work at all, but with this story it seems to. I'm guessing that Hannah is possibly schizophrenic? Either way she's suffering some sort of disease and I love the agoraphobia bit. I'm curious as to whether or not she's an author because a lot of authors are agoraphobic--I know I'm slightly like that. I'd rather stay in my room than go outside because outside fucking sucks. So yes, um I'm eager for the next update. :) Keep my posted.

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First thing first, I adore the title, it's gorgeous. The description set up is lovely, and the content in it betters everything.

So you have a way with words, but sometimes things are described too much. I'm just going to pull at the first sentence.

Dimly lit is kind of redundant, anyone who knows things about the Victorian Style knows that the lighting was bad, it makes the sentence too long and I was slightly distracted by it.

I really love the idea, it's fresh and interesting. :)

I really enjoyed this story. You have a unique style of writing. I haven't seen anything quite like this story before which is always a nice thing. I really loved the descriptions a lot. As silk tea said, you certainly do have a way with words. I like all the vocabulary because mature writers are hard to come by. The details are a really nice touch and make for great effect. The characters are very interesting and so is the story line.

I adore your style of writing.

You've certainly got a way with words. I find this piece a breath of fresh air. I haven't read anything quite like it--at least not on this site and thus I am subscribing. Your attention to detail is superb as well as your vocabulary choice. I'm well aware this comment is horrid--but once I get the chance to read through the rest of your story I'll leave a much better one. :)

Champ :) Extremely well written. Great job!