Gives You Fever - Comments

And chapter three. Wow, that was just... Wow. I secretly think that Carrigan wants to go down on Trystyn's rabbit hole and not the real one. ;) but that's my own perverted mind talking. I like the way Trystyn was fighting himself with wanting to go further and wanting to stop. I agree with him though that it would ruin their friendship if they went further than they already did. Um... They were really stoned which I liked how you described that Trystyn knew how to maintain how stoned he reall was and that Carrigan didn't really know how to handle it because, according to him, he doesn't do this type of thing. I'm definitely going to subscribe and I can not wait for more!

Alright so I've read chapter two! :D I just want to know, referring to the summary now, why do Trystyn's parents hate Carrigan. And sorry if I'm spelling names wrong, I'm trying not to. XD anyways, they took a big risk in making E in the chem lab. They shouldn't be doing that. But, college students, I suppose, can be dumb at some points. I can't wait to see what it's like when they're high and watching Alice In Wonderland. But, I do find it a little weird that Trystyn owns that movie. XD alright, now for chapter three!

Alright so I've only read the forward so far just so I can keep my thoughts collected about what happened in each chapter. It's easier for me like this.
So, as I was reading the summary, I got all sad. Rape? Why would somebody want to do that? And then, I read the forward. And, don't hate me, Carrigan kind of deserved it. Just like... 5% though. Not majorly. He sort of did deserve it because he got a restraining order on them even though they were just picking on him and harassing him a bit. But, I'm glad he learned how to physically and verbally fight back because he did break that Jonny kid's arm. And, I'm glad he cried in trial. He deserves to be in jail. And I'm glad Danny's in jail because it was wrong to rape somebody so innocent. Wow, did I just change my decision? Whatever... Anyways, I really hope that Carrigan can open up his feelings and learn to love Trystyn because he really needs somebody to love and care for him. So, I'm gonna go read the next chapter and get back to you with that one. :)