awwh I love the names of the two boys, very unique ^_^ I also loved the history class lyar was in, Alexander the great is an inspirations of mine (werid I know) Jay xo
i'm not tryin to be an ass hole i just thought that i'd point this out, Fraternal twin's are like zekeal and lyra, and alice and felice would be identical twin's XDD and gotta say KEEP!!
wow this is really good!!! ^_^ altho... i got lost several times in that last chapter when Lyra was being pushed around then he wakes up in the hospital then.... it's just not organized well im sorry >_< but overall, it's awesome so keep it!!! :D update soon!!! ^_^