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  • w h e e l s

    w h e e l s (100)

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    If I may make a suggestion, (: it's easier to read a large chapter if it has mainly short paragraphs. Adding a space between the paragraphs makes your story seem longer too. ;)
    -AE
    February 19th, 2011 at 03:51am
  • ray8788

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    I like it, update again :)
    February 18th, 2011 at 02:24am
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