Wow, its like an insight into the bad side of fame and how true love is better than anything else and that it is so hard to break. I feel that as it is not following the books, well not mentioning the majour happings of the book it makes it more of your own story. It has everything a good story need and your discribing is wonderfull. What I would like to know is why you type "we" like that with the thingymahbobs around it ? Anyways I love this story and would really like more soon please? I hope this satisfeys your need for a comment. x
That was pretty epic, omg I can't wait to find out what she goin do, she really fuck up. I Hope she get everything work out and not turn to drug after this. I can't wait for more, update soon! Please!
Well I would say have her screw up a bit more. It keeps the story interesting, unless you have something else that could keep it just as interesting. Do not get me wrong I am not a sadist, I just want to keep the story going.