The Fall of David Juarez - Comments

Loved the new chapter! Hm... not really sure what movie you quoted, though. Haha, I love how she keeps turning David down, too funny. :P Can't wait for more! :D

Hm... so is this going to be a little like John Tucker must die? I think so... I think so. Or that's the sense I'm getting from it, anyway. Can't wait for more! ♥
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This has caught my attention. Subscribing.

I loved this line from the first chapter, "Well I guess were walking down the yellow brick road ‘cause I got a plan.”

Just make sure to go over a chapter before posting to find any errors. In the sentence above, it should be "we're" and not "were." Update soon!

Oh wow, yay! You're finally starting this! Hm... the first chapter was very intriguing. lol. It's making me wonder what exactly you have in store. lol. Can't wait for more! :D

Hm... sounds interesting. Can't wait for more! :D
Definitely... Subscribed! :D