I Survived - Comments

  • ohrwurm.

    ohrwurm. (100)

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    This was by no means a dispointment, I'm really fond of your writing, as you know. Like bella; up there pointed out, you have a few spelling errors but I barely care, 'cause it was absolutely fantastic! I haven't seen the last Saw, but it's all good you probably didn't spoil much. But I remember that guy who cut off his foot, I think. I like the detailing you've incorporated because this is nearly a drabble, which isn't long. Seriously though dude, I'm astonished, and absolutely jealous nevertheless. You rock, and keep on rocking!
    January 31st, 2011 at 03:56am
  • Bella Goes Away.

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    Oh yay a Dr. Gordon drabble that isn't Adam/Gordon. :'D

    There were quite a few spelling errors, I think it'd do good to have someone read through and edit it, and it does this random switch from third to first POV, BUT, it was a really good concept, and the story behind the errors was GREAT! So, I still loved it! :D
    January 30th, 2011 at 09:53am