Update <3 I was just so happy when I got the mail. I laughed so hard with the whole thing about the bets. I'm so glad they both are together now *-* is just so amazing! Keep going >.<
Horny teenagers teehee....and I would yell at her too if she tried even a lickingof champagne. Have I told you I love Lily yes/no ah who cares she's kickass and got herself a man *wiggles eyebrows*
Imma tell Lily that Paige and Brian act like crazy teenagers when she's at work! hahah she waddled to the food. Aww Brian yelled at Jimmy to stop kissing Paiges belly. Yes I'm writing this as I read :3 HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAAH She growled at Brian.OMG I love Lily. :3
Ok, so I spent yesterday and today all day long reading this fic and eating, it was all I did, Please Please PLEASE update soon, I loved the story, I can't wait to see what's happening, plus I love the preggo sex *o* blame me.
I truly love this story, I love the plot. I was just wondering why you don't punctuate it properly. It becomes a chore sometimes to read it because there isn't proper punctuation usage. “I served Michelle with divorce papers. I’m divorcing her” Should at least be “I served Michelle with divorce papers. I’m divorcing her." One little period to make it proper. Sorry. i'm not trying to be a cunt. I do love your writing, it's just frustrating.
Chapter 41 It was about time that Brian ended it with Michelle Haha xD That was so typical of Jimmy to interrupt them like that My favorite part was when Lily asked if Brian could come in the bathroom And Paige was like 'Just let me fix the bubbles'....I don't know, but I laughed at that
Chapter 42 Aw, it was a really great idea for him to buy a big car like that Paige will be happy when she sees it Um, why do you have Zacky's birthday on the 10th? His birthday is on the 11th.....or do you have them party into his birthday? Aw, I so love Val for being a sweet one, even apologizing for her sister, which she didn't have to do as Michelle herself should be the one apologizing Well, I totally unerstand Paige's decision for wanting to wait to find out the sex of the other baby Yay, for Papa Gates giving great advice Oh....so it's final then, he wants to divorce her then, probably the best decision on his part ever made
Ps. There was one mistake in that chapter. I’m so scared dad and it’s all happening so fast and the twins are two in like two months. -> I bet you meant due
Chapter 43 FU**ING FINALLY!! It was definitley about time for those two and what makes it better that they don't have to worry about Michelle there What I don't get when people on here write sex scenes....they ALWAYS make the girl cum before the guy....It really doesn't work that way though, guys always get aroused quicker than girls, which also makes them cum first too.....But I guess with Paige here it's a bit different because of her hormones, maiking her extremely horny and stuff
Ps. Another mistake in this chapter. Soon he stopped stopping and kept going slowly picking up pace as we both started peaking slightly. -> uh, i don't really know what you want to say with this, lol
Well this was a slightly longer comment as I missed some chapters. I really can't wait for more Hope you update soon :)
Oh thank freaking gawd they finally went all the way!!! I was sexually frustrated for the poor girl. Yay divorce!! Michelle's bitchy behind needs to get kicked to the curb!! Now bring on some Haner babies! :) Loved it!
k seeing as im reading this all late and stuff and im around chapter 24... im having a hunch that shes pregnant and i hope she is!!! lmao the fans will win again michelle!!!
i just started reading your story, i dunno if you are done cuz im not at the end yet, but so far it is AMAZING!!! i have a favor to ask, and its a small one lol. you know the little icon you chose for this story??? i hope you do, and i dont seem like a total freak a zoid right now. can you tell me where you got that pic of syn??? i like it but its so small lol
I laughed so hard with the whole thing about the bets.
I'm so glad they both are together now *-* is just so amazing!
Keep going >.<