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  • watw

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    i like what you have done. the dream the whole situation. you made it happy and she deserves it.. shanes a nice guy.. still doesn't stop me from missing Charlie ridiculous amounts. that must mean you have a talent. You have no idea how happy i was when i got the update notification.. more please? :)
    September 13th, 2011 at 12:49am
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    Whoa, just this morning I was thinking when you were gonna update this and you did :)
    Aww, everyone's happy about the baby :3 I admit, at first I wasn't really into Shane with Charlie being gone, but I'm starting to like him more and more now :)
    Your still doing a super great job with this! :D

    Oh btw I think you made a mistake putting "chapter thirty-two" instead of "chapter thirty-one" :)
    September 12th, 2011 at 05:45am
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    n'awwwwwwww <3 aww aww aww. that is all my head is saying. I miss Charlie so much it was good to see a bit of him :) Love this, Love your talent!
    August 10th, 2011 at 08:57pm
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    i knew it... i knew it... I KNEW IT. but only because i sat thinking about it for hours... and when she was sick over the edge... OMG! this makes me miss Charlie more.how great of a dad would he have been please? But i do like Shane.. omg omg.. ok now that's happened i have NO IDEA what will happen now xD i want to cry every time i read it its so good... and because there's no more Charlie :/ he should 'visit' her in her dreams or something! ahhhhh! cant wait xD xD xD extremly excited at 4am :D hehe
    August 7th, 2011 at 04:47am
  • nikkiXsaysXrawr

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    thanks sweetie. I will try the best I can to give you your chapters. Im most likely going to try writing in notebooks when i cant get to the computer so that way, when i can log in you'll have alot to read. And I feel lost without him too, I've actually been using this whole situation to fuel Alex's emotions. Its easier to make you guys feel something real than something Im totally making up.
    July 22nd, 2011 at 08:35pm
  • watw

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    its completely understandable... take your time. im not complaining as long as i get to see what happens. because this is my favourite story on mibba along with my 2 best friends. its truly something... you know i love it xD... and Shane's starting to grow on me, i feel so lost without Charlie though :'(
    July 22nd, 2011 at 02:10pm
  • xXxScream

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    -Tear- I can't believe it's over! lol but it's so cute you need to make a sequel ;)
    July 17th, 2011 at 04:42pm
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    You appreciate us? xD we appreciate you more! well ok maybe thats not true i know how i feel with my story.. but seriously you are making this story epic! ok this is the 4th comment in a row... WHERE IS EVERYONE ELSE :) next time i post a chapter i'll tell everyone to come read yours! to good to miss out on
    July 15th, 2011 at 11:57pm
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    i dnt think i ever moved so quickly to get on mibba in my life once i got the update notification email! i think i know where your going with this, then again i might be completely wrong... but i hope im not xD as usual this is awesome! can't wait for the next update!
    July 14th, 2011 at 03:31pm
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    my heart just broke... i feel so desperate for him to come back. i miss his character already.. oh lordy. more tears.. this is excellent <3
    June 18th, 2011 at 04:58pm
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    you have me in tears.. floods of them.. i have to say that i love your story so much i have read it many times over.. i LOVE it its what keeps me writing. so please dont stop being that inspiration to people aiming to get to where you already are.. i dont want to stop crying because.. well i dont know its just that good... <3
    June 13th, 2011 at 12:01am
  • G.I.N.A.S.F.S

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    That nearly brought me to tears ;_;
    Don't ever stop writing, Nicole, you're just too good at it :D
    June 12th, 2011 at 03:20am
  • xXxScream

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    o.o'' I was talking about the character' aha now look whos the retard :3
    June 7th, 2011 at 11:21am
  • nikkiXsaysXrawr

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    :) you always will be.. and jenny.. don't make my #2 fan a he-she >:O "i agree with the girl.. dont let HIM die.." WTF you retard XD but its ok :) ily!
    April 24th, 2011 at 12:20am
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    Oh btw - - Damn right i'm your number ONE FAN! Lmao
    April 23rd, 2011 at 07:27am
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    ^^ I agree with the girl above :DD Everything she said lol.
    Don't let him die D: He cantttt!!!!!

    Great update, do it soon :D
    April 23rd, 2011 at 07:27am
  • watw

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    you have had me laughing all the way through this amazing creation.. i sat here creased for like 10 minutes at one thing and did the same thing every time i found it funny(which was a lot) ... i cried at the last chapter you've wrote so far and you honestly have to keep writing or i might actually die.. i'm already having withdrawal symptoms...

    i would honestly make you a million banners if i knew how to :/ i would create one for each chapter so im sorry i can't do that.. I have never read something by an unrecognised author that has inspired me like you have done with this.

    i honestly think that this has more than enough potential to get published and i would be more than happy to buy like 100 copies :)

    you are awesome and talented and if you give up i will delete every single but of work i own :) No pressure !!!!! XD Thankyou so much for this <3
    April 23rd, 2011 at 03:46am
  • b3stfriend4lif3

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    Oh wow this story is amazing and your quite a powerful writer, i could cry in that last chapter. Keep updating!
    March 27th, 2011 at 10:58pm
  • G.I.N.A.S.F.S

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    You updated :D
    Oooh, was someone proposing there at the end? :o Keep writing, you're doing an awesome job! :)
    March 17th, 2011 at 01:00am
  • StandardMisery

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    okay WOW that was a huge 8 - month jump XD
    i still loved it though :3
    March 5th, 2011 at 07:43am