February 2nd, 2011 at 06:06am
I liked this a lot :D
It could be a really interesting full story if you chose to develop it into that
And it would be interesting to see if Zack feels guilty/wants to get to know her more
I really enjoyed reading it =]
Its different then alot of the stories and one-shots on on here!
I definitely think you should continue with this!
It would definitely be an awesome story!
I'm subscribed just in case. Justsayin. : D