Keep on Licking Scars - Comments

  • KilljoyScarecrow

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    That's totally fine! Like I said, only you know what is best for your story, and I'm perfectly happy with it being in Frank's POV, it suits the story well and I enjoy your style :)
    I love all of your descriptions! Your description of Gee was perfect! I loved it.
    Their encounter was so adorable! And if I had to guess, I'd say that maybe Gerard isn't as blasé as he makes out. ;)
    Amazing chapter! My favourite so far!
    I can't wait to see what happens next!
    Great update! Can't wait for more :D
    February 14th, 2011 at 03:59pm
  • all time perv.

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    I LOVE THIS!
    I can't wait for the next chapter, just imagining Frank on the gig... [he will eventually join the band, won't he? xb]
    I love your writing, it doesn't matter if you do a Gee's POV or not, I still love this story :p
    February 14th, 2011 at 03:56pm
  • Phoenix_xX

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    You do not even realize how loudly i squealed when they started talking.
    ox
    February 14th, 2011 at 07:56am
  • yippeedoo

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    Whoo. They talked. xD
    Haha.
    February 14th, 2011 at 05:42am
  • PutTheASSiNbASS

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    frankie wasnt chewing on his fingers the whole time! XD
    i love this story cause I can relate to it, especially the crazy teenage crush and the obsessive finger biting. I love it :D
    keep updating :D

    <3xo
    February 14th, 2011 at 04:56am
  • poisongirl24

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    Woo! Yeah Frankie! Go get your man!
    February 14th, 2011 at 04:22am
  • isles and glaciers

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    I agree about the CD thing. Searching for CDs I already have on iTunes has become my thing in recent months XD Having the real thing is just so much cooler.
    And it's awesome that Frank talked to Gerard finally. Can't wait for the gig :3
    February 14th, 2011 at 03:44am
  • pulling teeth

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    I love this.
    <3

    BTW, in the most recent chapter, you wrote about Cassie's hair, and you said that it has never been "died." It would be more correct if you said, "dyed," or "colored." :)
    February 14th, 2011 at 01:38am
  • rockandrollgf

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    Bahh, this is cute. :D
    I love Gerard.
    February 14th, 2011 at 12:48am
  • Dr. Mrs. Vandertramp

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    I'm kind of glad you aren't doing a chapter in Gerard's POV. It seems like it would be too soon. I really liked the chapter. Update wicked soon!
    February 14th, 2011 at 12:42am
  • stay weird

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    Awe.They finally spoke to one another. This makes me very happy. :) I can agree with just having Frank's POV if it's going to throw off the story in any way. I really like this story so far. Can't wait for more. <3
    February 14th, 2011 at 12:36am
  • baysway

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    This was awesome. I like just having Frank's POV. It makes you wonder if Gerard has ever noticed Frank but keeps it a mystery. Side note - I feel the same way about CDs. I must have the original physical copy.
    February 13th, 2011 at 11:55pm
  • MissPunkRawk

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    Mibba is like freaking out. My stories never come up in searches either.
    February 11th, 2011 at 04:43pm
  • isles and glaciers

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    After looking at that, I'm pretty sure I have dermatillomania o.o I was picking at my fingers and biting the inside of my mouth as I was reading it, without noticing.

    Another great update :3 I agree with the others, a chapter in Gerard's POV would be rad.
    February 11th, 2011 at 04:09am
  • Dr. Mrs. Vandertramp

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    I liked this chapter. It was cool getting more insight on Frank's life. Update wicked soon!
    February 11th, 2011 at 03:32am
  • sexualbull

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    I love this.
    I feel like Frank and I have so much in common in this. Picking, nail biting, being a third wheel. It's kind of weird :3
    February 11th, 2011 at 02:03am
  • jazzy.

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    i think that gerard's pov would be interesting:)
    February 10th, 2011 at 09:09pm
  • Hundefot.

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    I'm definitely going to quit biting my nails. No offence, but it really does sound kind of gross, and don't get me started on the pictures on those links.

    A really great chapter though! I love how you write it really interesting, but nothing very special happens in it. I love this chapter - more information about Frank (and his friends). I can't wait for the next chapter, I want to meet Gerard!

    I think you should keep it in Frank's POV.

    Great job, honey! Can't wait for more - this is getting really good.

    xo
    February 10th, 2011 at 08:27pm
  • Lesbianwooman

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    You should definitely do one in Gerards POV :) i want to know what goes on in his head, and if he notices Frank when he's there :)
    Update soon! x
    February 10th, 2011 at 08:13pm
  • stay weird

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    I think a chapter in Gerard's POV would be great. I want to know what's going on his head as well. Great update and can't wait for more. <3
    February 10th, 2011 at 06:16pm