I think it would be awesome to have a chapter from Gerard's POV to give us an insight into his life. But it's your story, only you know what is best for it, so it's your decision. :) I really like this chapter, I love how the story is progressing, it's so interesting :) I adore the way you write, you really allow us to get into Frank's head and feel how he is feeling. You're so talented :') Great update! Can't wait for more :D
Amazingly I've never heard of skin picking, i am a nail bter sometimes but skin picking, unusual, but that what makes Frankie hot;;D He's not like everyone else, now that's just boring lol. Anyways, update, loving the story
I cringed until I remembered that I do the same thing. I chew the my nails and the skin around them. It's more of a nervous thing then anything else. Very good. I'm subscribed. =]
I like how you're writing this in the first person, it seems more personal than your other stories almost (not that I'm not totally in love with them). Not about the story, but I didn't get a notification when this was posted...it was a good thing you posted a link in Marble House!
There hasn't happended anything huge so far, but you have given us insight in Frank's life, and it's really a great beginning ro any story to give readers insight in the main character's life. I feel like I "know" Frank a enough to join him as he keeps on living his life, and that's because you wrote it so well!
I love how you always seem to catch everybody's attention and keep it - it's a great thing and you have a gift. I love the way you write.
I also love how Frank has the habit of picking on his scin. It's something unique; only found in this specific story, and it's easier for people to remember the story now. The way he's confused about his sexuality, is something to love as well.
Thank you for sharing your art with us, and I sure hope for an update soon.
okay, I can't help it: I bit my nails and flesh around it everyday! I can't seem to stop, is just a vice :b oh, and the skin picking? the same. it's just, I don't like seeing those solid blood over there, I just take it off :b I love this story, and I already subscribed (a) it's so captivating (:
Another amazing chapter. Giving us more insight into Frankie's world and how he thinks. It's really interesting, I like it :) I like how that majority of it is written from Frank's own head. Does that make sense? Like it's his thoughts, feelings and perspective on things etc. It's really good :) I can't wait until he encounters Gerard and we see what happens! Great update! Can't wait for more :D
Even after only two chapters this is so good. I am literally sitting here and wishing there was more to read. Even the skin picking and nail biting (which I am totally guilty off. I don't pick my skin but I do bite the skin around my nails off. :( ) is interesting. Anyways, so I obviously really like this story and can't wait for more. <3
so far i really like this! i can sorta relate to the picking on the skin thing. i bite my nails and the skin around my nails. they look really bad, but i think it is about control. i will watch for an update on this story!