Keep on Licking Scars - Comments

  • GreenKilljoyElliot

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    My Frerard doesn't come up in the search either D: I liked the update, can't wait for the next on this and marble house :) xox
    February 10th, 2011 at 06:07pm
  • KilljoyScarecrow

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    I think it would be awesome to have a chapter from Gerard's POV to give us an insight into his life. But it's your story, only you know what is best for it, so it's your decision. :)
    I really like this chapter, I love how the story is progressing, it's so interesting :)
    I adore the way you write, you really allow us to get into Frank's head and feel how he is feeling. You're so talented :')
    Great update! Can't wait for more :D
    February 10th, 2011 at 06:06pm
  • all time perv.

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    I want more, this is so fucking good (: [all your stories are good, but okay :p]
    You're a great writer, the way you describe things amazes me :b

    tons of frerard love «3
    February 10th, 2011 at 06:04pm
  • SexyDork17

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    Amazingly I've never heard of skin picking, i am a nail bter sometimes but skin picking, unusual, but that what makes Frankie hot;;D He's not like everyone else, now that's just boring lol. Anyways, update, loving the story
    February 10th, 2011 at 07:52am
  • The Horror.

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    I cringed until I remembered that I do the same thing. I chew the my nails and the skin around them. It's more of a nervous thing then anything else. Very good. I'm subscribed. =]
    February 9th, 2011 at 09:20pm
  • tranquility69

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    I like how you're writing this in the first person, it seems more personal than your other stories almost (not that I'm not totally in love with them).
    Not about the story, but I didn't get a notification when this was posted...it was a good thing you posted a link in Marble House!
    February 9th, 2011 at 08:33pm
  • rockandrollgf

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    This is interesting! Do we get a chapter from Gerard's point of view? :)
    February 9th, 2011 at 08:45am
  • Hundefot.

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    I'm really loving this!

    There hasn't happended anything huge so far, but you have given us insight in Frank's life, and it's really a great beginning ro any story to give readers insight in the main character's life. I feel like I "know" Frank a enough to join him as he keeps on living his life, and that's because you wrote it so well!

    I love how you always seem to catch everybody's attention and keep it - it's a great thing and you have a gift. I love the way you write.

    I also love how Frank has the habit of picking on his scin. It's something unique; only found in this specific story, and it's easier for people to remember the story now. The way he's confused about his sexuality, is something to love as well.

    Thank you for sharing your art with us, and I sure hope for an update soon.

    xoxo
    February 9th, 2011 at 12:38am
  • all time perv.

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    okay, I can't help it: I bit my nails and flesh around it everyday! I can't seem to stop, is just a vice :b oh, and the skin picking? the same. it's just, I don't like seeing those solid blood over there, I just take it off :b
    I love this story, and I already subscribed (a) it's so captivating (:
    February 8th, 2011 at 11:43pm
  • KilljoyScarecrow

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    Another amazing chapter. Giving us more insight into Frankie's world and how he thinks. It's really interesting, I like it :)
    I like how that majority of it is written from Frank's own head. Does that make sense? Like it's his thoughts, feelings and perspective on things etc. It's really good :)
    I can't wait until he encounters Gerard and we see what happens!
    Great update! Can't wait for more :D
    February 8th, 2011 at 02:45pm
  • Phoenix_xX

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    Ahh, I pick my skin to. All my friends like i'm on crack because of it. :|
    Love the update. ox
    February 8th, 2011 at 08:27am
  • SpankMyFrank

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    I love how it's so detailed when talking about him picking his skin and biting his nails.
    I find it completely disgusting. In a good sort of way. :)

    Tacos
    February 8th, 2011 at 06:31am
  • Dr. Mrs. Vandertramp

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    I quite like this! Update wicked soon!
    February 8th, 2011 at 03:11am
  • stay weird

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    Even after only two chapters this is so good. I am literally sitting here and wishing there was more to read. Even the skin picking and nail biting (which I am totally guilty off. I don't pick my skin but I do bite the skin around my nails off. :( ) is interesting. Anyways, so I obviously really like this story and can't wait for more. <3
    February 8th, 2011 at 01:17am
  • Hell in your eyes

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    I like it! Really interesting! :'D
    Update when you can! n_n
    February 7th, 2011 at 11:51pm
  • julielikesrainbows

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    i love it
    February 7th, 2011 at 10:16pm
  • MissPunkRawk

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    It's kinda gross to think about doing, but I like how you worked it in to this story. Update soon!
    February 7th, 2011 at 09:58pm
  • GreenKilljoyElliot

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    Love it!! Can't wait for the next update!! xox
    February 7th, 2011 at 05:37pm
  • TechniColorScream

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    I like this, honestly I do. I am subscribing. I can't wait for this story to develop.

    TCS
    February 7th, 2011 at 09:27am
  • mcrloveforever4

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    so far i really like this! i can sorta relate to the picking on the skin thing. i bite my nails and the skin around my nails. they look really bad, but i think it is about control. i will watch for an update on this story!
    February 7th, 2011 at 07:00am