Hey, Soul Sister - Comments

Just had to point out that the links in the summary chapter were messed up Just an observational point of view.

I enjoyed this story and I liked how it is that you interpreted the song as well as how you almost secretly placed that song into the story. I enjoyed reading it and I thought it was cute. It was a love story without all that much affection. I liked the fact that there wasn't lots of dialogue, not many people who write stories that lack dialogue are able to do it well. So you get major props. I didn't find any major grammatical or spelling errors which makes me smile a whole lot.

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Well, there isn't much to say about this story. Atleast not bad things. I loved how there wasn't alot of talking, which means you were showing and not telling. Brownie Points for that.
I also like that you didn't use one word over and over again because that eventually gets annoying.
One thing to change or make better is to show the relationship that James and Logan have. Are they best friends, brothers etc. I understand that these people are from the show Big Time Rush, but maybe you could have changed their relationship and that reader wouldn't know that, but that was just a minor thing that came to me as a after thought. So, overall, very impressive : )

I am in love with the layout. Seriously. So, so, so pretty.
The plotline was so original and fluffy and wonderfully fleshed out. I love how she was just dancing and made up her own moves - sounds like me, 'cept she can probably dance a lot better.
The ending was heartwarming.
Is this gonna be a chaptered fic? If it is, lemme know, so I can subscribe. <3

It was really good. Is there going to be another chapter? I really loved the layout you have here. It was really eye catching.