February 1st, 2011 at 04:57pm
I’ve joined the contest too (Little Mermaid) but Hercules has always been a favorite so I’m very excited to see what you’ve come up with.
I don’t normally like stories that start out slow, but you really brought me in with “he was a god.” You write extremely well. You’re details are amazing “sweat soaked” and “concrete kissed” goodness I just love it.
I’m looking forward to reading more!
i'm kind of speechless.