First off- I love Placebo so it was nice to simply see this story on here. Now for the rest. I liked this a lot. It was different. I'm not usually into stories with the guy being the main character and the girl being the distant, slightly known background character; I'm not used to the girl being the "heartbreaker." But I did read it all because it kept me reading. I also didn't know the song before, so I looked it up (I always have to after reading a songfic- even if this one was loosely based). You have a nice way with words and can write easily and smoothly. The only problem I would state was the dialogue was a bit weak; however, it wasn't weak enough to be unbelievable. Oh and also- I liked the banner :) Great job!
Now for the rest. I liked this a lot. It was different. I'm not usually into stories with the guy being the main character and the girl being the distant, slightly known background character; I'm not used to the girl being the "heartbreaker." But I did read it all because it kept me reading. I also didn't know the song before, so I looked it up (I always have to after reading a songfic- even if this one was loosely based). You have a nice way with words and can write easily and smoothly. The only problem I would state was the dialogue was a bit weak; however, it wasn't weak enough to be unbelievable.
Oh and also- I liked the banner :)
Great job!