Branded - Comments

First off, beautiful layout(:
Ah, thanks to Honors English, I actually know about Zeus, Hades, ect. I think it's brilliant that you tied Mythology into this story so well.
I love the way you describe things - it makes me feel like I'm physically there.
Bonus points if he nails Zeus' daughter. For some reason that last line made me smile. This story is really intriguing and I'm quite excited to see where this goes. (:
You have major talent, dear. Keep on writing. I'm excited for this :D

I've seen a rise in stories involving mythology, thus far this is the best one I've come across. Granted, I don't know much about Greek and Roman gods and godesses, I know that Zeus had many wives but I've never heard of a daughter - it's only fitting that she would be beautiful though. And, of course, she would be granted some sort of pardon by living in California in this Earthly hell.

I like the explanation of her punishment - that she had helped gain peace and security on Earth during a war. I found it a bit strange though, because I thought the gods were supposed to want to help people on Earth. Maybe I'm wrong, I honestly have no clue and I feel like I'm aimlessly babbling.

I like the idea of a fallen angel hunter, it adds in a nice twist, reminds me of Buffy in a way. THe fact that there is a male/female aspect though, leads me to believe that Atticus may use romance as a means of capturing Rihanna. But again, like I'd know.

I'll subscribe, since it's managed to hold my attention. Besides, your description is absolutely breathtaking <3

I love the title, along with the layout and banner :)
ahh children really are quite curious, and parents dont watch over them well
I also like the name Rihanna, it's never a name I've heard of outside of the singer
"her kind"? I wonder what exactlly her kind is.. that's a good hook right there
so she was more "up" on her knd, like more liked I guess you could say?
and people were jealous- so she was sent to Earth?
I'm guessing this has something to do with angels.....
Ohh, not to earth, but to hell, where Hades puts them
and they get a tatto and go back to the human world, okay I'm getting this now
and I'm understanding the connection between the banner and the story
so it was for a reason- to help fight a war?
I really liked this whole thing, it was really good!
a very interesting idea too.. very creative on your part :D

Oh wow. I really love where this is going. I am so excited :)

Ah, Atticus. I have a feeling I will enjoy his character very much. Why is it that the bad guy is always loved? Or just UNFED at? Either way, lovely update--and so...like Rihanna is totally his cousin. So I'm assuming no lovey-doveryness?

My computer totally sucks for not letting me know this has been updated, dang yahoo. So, I have to say that this is the first story I've read by you and I'm loving your writing style. This story had a very unique sort of... well I don't want to say ring to it, because that's not what I really mean, it was more than just unique from the summary. Ah, basically, it's different, in like that superb way. I like the way you're explaining things with your characters. I can't wait for an update.

Ahhh! I love it.

Would you please continue the fabulous-ness?

I know this is a shitty comment, but I shall comment with every update. Promise.

This is really neat. I absolutely love mythology, and I really like your writing style, so I feel like this is gonna be good :)

I like a lot that this is going to be Gods and Goddesses type of thing. I like that Rihanna is Zeus' daughter and it also makes me wonder if you're going to include Hercules at all. I'm very excited on what you keep up to par with the mythology and just overall I'm excited to read your writing. :)

I like it! Keep writing! (:

i'm sure as hell excited for this story :)
i love greek gods :)

interesting can't wait for the next update!

I totally love the layout. And the story idea. I am so ready to read this, because I bet it will be wonderful. Will they be the stereotypical Gods, like the Gods from Percy Jackson? Or will they be new Gods that are not Greek or Roman or part of any other ancient civilization?

Can't wait to read this. Good luck!

Aw, yeah. Who's excited for this bitch? Billie Mae is.