I like this (: how Cherie and PonyBoy are cheating on their significant others who they're supposedly in love with. And not to mention I love The Outsiders :D Cynthia's dad is really nice too, taking care of Janis while PonyBoy and Cynthia are out. I hope you update soon :D
Not familiar with anyone in the story but I think it's interesting and very well-written.. I've only read the first part, but I will be reading more when I get back from work :)
I like how her day starts right away, and in less than 5 minutes she's already duking it out with her boyfriend, haha.. I know how that is! Used to get in quickie-fights like those with my ex all the time. Her dad is sweet to take care of Janis, though! Ponyboy sounds like such a drama queen..