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  • EricaC

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    hmm, she doesnt seem at all like me but my favorite character is Erica. Yah she is definitely the best xD Lovin' the story but it needs more of my favorite character Erica!!! Maybe its because we have the same name but she's the coolest. Love the storryyy
    February 22nd, 2011 at 11:28pm
  • hottieblondie

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    I have no idea who you are, but my two favorite characters are Skye and Erik. They are such a cute couple. They are amazing! I love them so much! Skye seems like a cool person, and Erik seems like a total ladies-man and I can tell that he really loves Skye.
    February 20th, 2011 at 12:26am
  • worldclass

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    I like it :) Just one correction:

    Chapter 1: "Reaching for a tray I fill it with whatever looked eatable." It should be "edible." That is, oddly enough, the word that means "eat-able" whereas eatable isn't actually a word. Weird, I know.
    February 3rd, 2011 at 04:54am
  • Geezyxo

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    SCORE! COMMENT VIRGINITY IS MINE! HAHA, ANYWHORE, I CLICKED IT........... O_o
    February 2nd, 2011 at 11:43pm
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