heyyyy :) I really enjoyed this! It was nice that you made it so emotional without having a lot of sexual contact (some storied i've read are too ridiculously sexual aha). The only thing i wasn't too sure on was the part where you made Ian say "Sean, will you be my boyfriend" don't get me wrong, there's not much you can say to make it sound better haha but maybe go about asking it a different way next time :) That's all i have to comment on! It was really good :D! xoxo
That's all i have to comment on! It was really good :D! xoxo