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  • bloodravyn

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    i absolutely adored this!
    April 18th, 2011 at 07:40am
  • amdinunzio

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    i love stories like this that make me cry. and i think she should have bitched out matt because he didnt have to listen to everything val said...so its not like it was all her fault haha.
    March 31st, 2011 at 04:37am
  • chelcie

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    I just started reading this story and its amazing! As i was reading Chapter 10, A Little Piece Of Heaven came on on my Pandora, that is my favorite Avenged song simply because of Jimmy.
    March 30th, 2011 at 03:51am
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    So I just started reading this story today and finished it! LOVED it! Aweswome, AWESOME job!!!!!!!!!
    March 28th, 2011 at 08:17am
  • LimeBerryLatte

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    I wish there was a 'favourite' or 'love' button somewhere cause I want to keep this with me foREVer! *clap clap* xD
    March 25th, 2011 at 02:02am
  • bldydrkangl

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    Ok so I know this story has been completed for a while now but I had to tell you that when I picked this up from trolling the site, I didn't expect to get so hopelessly addicted as I was/am. It was a really good read ^_^
    March 22nd, 2011 at 05:50pm
  • Nia_Flores

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    So... it took me a while to caught up with this story. I think I'm subscribe to more stories than I can handle... but this one I found it pretty amazing. I love the way it's writing & I loved the storyline. You did a fantastic job. Just wanted to let you know.
    March 20th, 2011 at 07:59am
  • Don'tTryToFixMe

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    good story(: and yes Gangland would be super bad ass(:
    March 17th, 2011 at 12:54pm
  • mrgn94cb

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    Sad for the end os this story it was sooo amazing!!! You should def. put up Gangland!
    March 17th, 2011 at 12:03pm
  • shaynay1125

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    Probably the only story on Mibba that actually made me bawl like a baby. You are talented and I would love to read Gangland. I'm sorry I didn't find your story sooner or I would have commented like crazy! If you ever need proof-reading I'm available as well, I'd be honored.
    P.S. I read this whole story in one night, couldn't log off!
    March 17th, 2011 at 08:56am
  • L.O.V.E.

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    aww that was so cute head boo boo aww haha!!!
    cant wait for the next story!!!!
    March 17th, 2011 at 07:27am
  • Jazz1617

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    This was such a great story! I'm a little sad to see it end but it was a good ending.

    And you should definitely post the other Syn Gates story! :)
    March 17th, 2011 at 06:27am
  • hachie

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    So she has three kids!!!!
    And she named her youngest after Uncle JImmy!!!!! X3
    Yep Ryder definitely takes after his mother, since he is kind and very sweet unlike her daughter who is very bold and will do whatever she wants just like Brian! XD
    I loved how the beginning started! I thought Ryder got in trouble hen Hayden yelled out his name but she did it to get his attention!!!!!
    I have enjoyed this story very much and I can't want for the new Syn Gates story to be out!!!!!!
    March 17th, 2011 at 04:36am
  • XxWishxOnxAxStarxX

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    amazing chapter I cant wait to read the last one.
    March 17th, 2011 at 01:47am
  • L.O.V.E.

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    she is great person i would have punch val then forgave her. but i dont want it to end!!!!!!
    March 17th, 2011 at 12:10am
  • viciousfeeling

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    take that Val
    this chapter was brilliant! i can't wait for the next one but at the same time i don't want it to end :?
    March 16th, 2011 at 11:00pm
  • hachie

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    Wow she finally got him to listen to what she has to say.
    She sure told him!
    So every time didn't go his way he would bring Michelle into the argument?
    Man he is stupid and I am glad that she finally told him that if he ever does that again, she is just going to go and fuck Adam despite what Brian says.
    She would let the whole world know that she is going to sleep with another man because she is tired of being treated like a chore to Brian.
    Wow Val is now heartbroken is because of what she did that tore a family apart just because she wanted to protect her sister's pride.
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE POST THE LAST CHAPTER SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    March 16th, 2011 at 10:16pm
  • catbat

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    You are right, this is a brilliantly written chapter, the reader can tell you enjoyed writing it! Thanks this was a great story, clever and a great read! Can't wait to see what write next!

    Have to say, I still think Brian is a toad, but he is her toad : D
    March 16th, 2011 at 10:08pm
  • catbat

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    IFFFFF she takes back Brian, I hope she makes him walk on broken glass for telling her that their marriage was a mistake when the only people at fault were Matt and VAL (bitch), when he KNEW she was pregnant with his second child AND ran straight to Michelle just DUMPING their upset kid. Can't wait til she hears about the kiss!!! I hate him actually, and he doesn't deserve her !
    March 16th, 2011 at 07:03pm
  • viciousfeeling

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    hahaha you tell em hayden

    how can there be only 2 chapters left nooo this needs to go on forever
    is there going to be a sequel although i'm not really sure what is would be about i guess i'm just not ready to be apart of the lives of these characters
    update soon
    March 16th, 2011 at 06:40pm
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