Monster - Comments

Please update soon xxx

Loved it. Wonderful story.

oooo this is such an interesting setup for a story, I love it!
I really hope Cata testifies and nothing happens to her or Amelia before that :S
Can't wait for the next one!

I fell in love with this story!I was getting so into it,even crying a little,and figured out there wasn't anything else to read yet:( amazing story pleaseeeee update sooon.

-flails madly- YOU BEAUTIFUL, FLAWLESS WOMAN
I love this. I really, really do, though I nearly shit myself over every chapter. And now I'm all tense over the court verdict. So well done.

This story is amazing! I love it and I can't wait for the next update.

OMG please update soon... it's been over a month x this is one of the best Iker Casillas stories I have read don't give up on it :D x

Just read your story... it brought tears to my eyes :( hope you update again soon xx

Shocking chapter! I knew that Marius was a complete dick but to smother his own granddaughter or attempted to do so. How could he? That's a baby for crying out loud?! It just makes me wonder how people like that can do that to little kids or infants with no mercy whatsoever. I have to say that you did leave some 'me' instead of 'her' in your chapter. I think like two or three are in there just to let you know :) I loved it like usual

AHH!! AWESOME chapter; stopped too soon; NEED to know more! Update soon, yeah, Rox? :D

Aw thank so much for dedicating the story to me and how dare Charles do that to her? Man I wish Iker gave a piece of his mind to them; honestly I would join in too. lol Poor Catalina her world just came crumbling down when she arrived home and now driving with Charles was just icing on the cake. Does Marius know what goes on, like make arrangements so he can have another witness or testimony against Iker and Sara? So many thoughts running through my head and this story keeps getting more amazing. Can't wait for the next one

Sorry for not having commented on this sooner. I haven't really had the time to read or comment. But I'm doing that now, so yaaay! aha :)
The latest chapter was so incredibly sad and the things in that occurred in it were absolutely horrible. Buuut, of course, you're style of writing totally pulled me in and made me love the chapter.
Update soon please! :)

EEEEEHHH!!!! Horrible, HORRIBLE chapter! UNBELIEVABLE to think people actually do get treated like ihn the world; it's simply unnerving.

Well-written though, and can't wait for more! :D and thanks for the mention, dearie!

My goodness. This one by far made me bawl like a baby. I was just so teary eyed just reading the way the father beat on the mother mercilessly while their daughter is watching trapped in a cage. Just really heartbreaking. It was so dark and just pull on your heart strings, it was a really great chapter of capturing all the emotions. That's what I love about your writing is that you don't go too far or make it sound so corny and unbelievable. It was just right.

Oh my God, how unbelievable! I can NOT wait for the next chapter to find out more about Charlie!

This story just keeps getting better and better. I was getting tired and was going to read this story in the morning but it woke me up. Seriously it did. It pissed me off that the parents wanted to charge kidnapping. I swear babies have a sixth sense about things like that, they know when something bad is going to happen. I wonder if Iker and Sara are going to be released or stay in jail since the parents want to charge them. What I hate more than her father is her mother; she doesn't have the decency to leave even with her back story it's just not right to be sporting black and blue every day. I feel bad for Catalina, what is Charles gonna say or better yet do to her? more please

Nooooooooooooooooooooooooo....! That was a horrid place to stop! I'm banking on an update after your graduation! :D

Awww that was so sad. I remember my grandmother singing mensings like the ones you have in this chapter. Abuela Amelia sounds like a wonderful woman who loved Cata with all her heart. I see why she named her daughter after her. Got me a little teary eyed, this story hits close to home more than I imagined actually. It's really great and good luck on your finals and have a safe trip. :)

Oh man, that chapter made me tear up. I basically cried when Charlie took advantage of her like that. I can't believe he would do such a thing to the poor girl. It never crossed my mind that Catalina was sexually abused resulting in Amelia. I just thought she had sex and got pregnant not someone forcing themselves on her. It made me cringe and cry throughout the whole abuse, physically and sexually. It was a good chapter and I was a bit shocked that you went into detail on her assault, well not that much but just a little bit. I thought you would just skip to the next scene.

Oh...WOW. That was stunning, it really was. It gave me chills! Beautifully written and very well-expressed.

P.S. I know! Undeserved card! And I don't like Valdes either - he looks vile.

P.P.S. Hope you do well on your exams then :D