A World Without Her - Comments

I don't know if i am stupid or i can't read. But i just don't get the last line in the last chapter

this was simply amazing.
you're a very good writer and you wrote a wonderful story.
i really, really liked it.

This may be one of the saddest things I've read for quite a while. Seriously. The entire time I was reading it, I was begging for her to just walk back through the door. I wanted so strongly for everything to be alright, because deep down, I am a romantic, and I want true love to prevail. I want there to be the, "And they lived happily ever after," at the end of the story.

Of course, you write realities, not fairy tales. And, even if things do work out somewhat positively in the end of your stories, I'm never completely unaware of the reality that lays behind.

I did notice quite a few typos in this story (though I didn't stop to put any down. Sorry). They weren't really enough to make the story unreadable or anything, and they were usually either a word close in spelling, or a key mistyped because it was close on the keyboard.

It was really a great story. So full of emotion, and so compelling. I felt myself actually become emotionally invested in the story, which, although it made me sad, is a great thing to accomplish.

Great job, my dear.