21 and Invincible - Comments

This was creative. It explains a little of the past, their current situation, and the future. Your writing style flows very nicely.

this was amazing.
i really liked the banner and the writing was, as usual, excellent. :)

first comment, woo <3!
I really like this title- it gives off a positive attitude :)
then I like the chapter title too haha
ahh i love the beginning of this so much
it's so carefree, the wind blowing in his face, cranking good music
this is one of the many reasons I want my license!
aviators man, guys look sexy in those :3 haha
aww, she might have to go? that wouldn't be good :(
but I guess whatever is good with Kandi...
(you really like that name, don't you? isn't that your name?)
I love how you got ballad in there instead of a song
I love that term- and it makes me happy when people know what that means :D
even though it had some bumpy roads with her might be leaving and all,
but at least it ended on a positive note- I really lked that :)
this was great, as per usual of your work :D