How Did You Get So Cold? - Comments

Woo! A Kennedy story. This is the first one I've ever read, and I loved it. I loved how you weren't afraid to make the band boy the bad guy in the scenario. In most stories like this, its the girl. There was no mistakes, and it fit with the song. Lights and The Maine together? Perfect. Thanks for entering this.

I loved the way you wrote Erin's pain, a way that the reader can relate. The punctuation was perfect, and I liked your use of bold's and italics. I listened to this song, and Kenny perfectly summed that song, how he was emotionless, careless and, well... Cold.

Good job, I enjoyed your writing very much (:

i liked this a lot.
it was so sad and the way you described everything; kenny's appearance especially, it was great.