Unexpected - Comments

I just read the whole thing, and honestly, it brought me to tears. Oh my goodness, what a sad story. It was incredibly written though, I loved it. Keep up the good work. :)

Made me wanna cry :'(
The plot was a bit too fast. The chapters could have been longer to smooth things over and a little bit more detail. Good job and good luck! You scored a 44 out of 50.

All I can say is...wow. I know I comment with praise on pretty much all of your stories, but this is the shortest one and the whole of it is amazing. It's not a new sort of story, I've read things like it before, but Layla had me from the beginning. I loved how she and Cam were with each other, and that Tory was supportive rather than freaking out about it all. The ending, believe it or not, MADE ME CRY, after I just got done crying from watching the movie Steel Magnolias for the first time. Proves me right, once again, how great of an author you are. I hope you do well in the contest. :D