Welcome to Club Chaos; a Darklife Story - Comments

You should definately expand it. You could play on the fighting a bit more and maybe have it so that Evie gets dragged into the middle of it unwillingly and then has to choose sides. Or even something like enrolling Damien in her school and have Ian go there too. It could add to the tension between the too.

Looking forward to the hopefully next chapter!

~lauren

Very good!
Definetly interresting, I would honestly say that I love the story and that I could see it developing into something a lot fuller, a real rom/com/fic!
The characters are brilliant and the setting is a definet. I would say though that if you were to exspand that the aunt and cousin characters could really flourish as well as your main ones!

I am really looking forwards to a possible continuation!

Nixxy