Scream! - Comments

@ JulyGirl
Yup yup :) Thanks for reading :)

@ BeenDownThatRoad
Thank you for the comment :) AND thank you for pointing out how the story turned out in one paragraph. What happened was, I put it through a spell checker when I finish typing it up, and then I paste it directly on here. I hadn't noticed that it pushed everything together since I had done all my proof reading before hand and had no reason to go over the story once it was on here. The next one, I will make sure I go through again and separate it like I have it before putting it through the spell checker.

Yay you are back! :)

I like this:) Matt can be an evil dick, but still has some nice left in him...maybe. I wonder if the other guys have girls back at their place? Or maybe Matt is the only one, we will see.

Oh, I just wanted to mention too, that I really like this story, but find it a little hard to read when its all jut one big paragraph. Maybe you could separate it a little bit more?

Cant wait to see where this goes:)

Please update soon!

I cant wait to see what happens next i hope that you can update again soon.

I loved this! more please (: