I love this so much! I seriously spent most of my day reading all 21 chapters and now I'm obsessed. I actually got a little depressed when there wasn't another chapter for me to read. I love how hesitant Gerard is on the outside even though it's obvious on the inside that he wants it. Keep writing :)
You don't suck, I think you're great! :) I loved the line about the "protective shield" around his heart. *wants to give Frankie a cuddle* Don't worry about banging out chapters as quickly as you can, just write when the moment feels... uh, right. :) xx
I totally know what you're going through with this story; it's happening to me in my new story as well. but I'm glad you updated :3 and what an amazing update you got here! (: keep up the great work, and calm down, and then write :b ---XO---
Oh Vicky you do not suck at getting your ideas down! I loved this and I thought it flowed perfectly as an update :D It's such a cute little highschool Frerard <333 xxx
I have to go to work so I can't leave a long review but OH MY GOD I NEED MORE OF THIS! Gerard and Frank are such cutie-pies! I'll leave a better review later dollface. ^^ xx *subscribes*
OMG, beautiful update. The way you described Gerard vicky was so immense. Truly beautiful :D I love it! I also love your story, it's amazing. <3 Update soon :D xx