7 Nightmares - Comments

Jessii Tara; (100)

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I like this a lot but the overuse of the exclamation points like this: I wasn’t in my room!!!

Takes away from the effect a bit. Either way this is awesome! *subs*

October 15th, 2011 at 07:42pm

username007 (100)

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The first chapter pulled me in,

“I’m going to do it now”

“Do what?” I said finally.

“Eat you” He said with a strong and sensual tone and then he bite my neck.

That was my favorite part. It made me squeal a little in fear.

October 15th, 2011 at 03:35am

ClassicRomantic (100)

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OooOOooh!
Just as brilliant as your 'letters to nobody''/!
I love the way your writing flows and how you can make an idea that may of been used before and make it completely original and fresh!
Write more, Write more, Write more!!
(That was an order, you must obey xD)

October 12th, 2011 at 03:39am