Regretful - Comments

Silence seems to be the usual sound, the place did not matter.
First, replace the comma with a semicolon because it’s taking the place of a preposition.
Anyways, I was actually thinking about this kind of thing today. So I was taking a three mile walk today because I just was and I found this path and just how quiet everything was. It was so still and silent and I was alone and it was just amazing. <3

You should definitely be more than pleased with this. It’s really poetic and symbolic, actually. It’s not too choppy, and the parts that are could be easily fixed. It’s a really nice piece that has its melancholy feel to it, yet it’s peaceful. It’s like a calm-sad sort of feeling.

I like it. Really. <3

This was good though you switched tenses. But yeah other than that, good job on this. Really powerful.

This was really good.
I felt let it could have kept going, but in other ways I dont, but thats just me.
You should be proud of this, it was really good.
Overall this was beyond good, I loved it :)

This was really interesting. I like the idea behind it, and the line you state that says silence is always there is something I find myself thinking a lot. I really thought this was easy to read and I liked the way you described the old woman, although I spotted one or two grammatical errors. This was amazing, none the less. Good job!!

Goodness, you should be proud. That was amazing! I really liked how you based it off a poem, and I liked the layout, simple, yet super sweet. And sorry for the delay. -.- I hope to see more work, and I take this is a drabble right? Oh well, so I can't say update soon, but I loved this.

I really liked the layout. (:
For some reason it reminded me of a type of snow tea, hehe.<33

If I make a suggestion? o:

Silence seems to be the usual sound, it didn't matter what place she was.

Rewording this sentence? It's kind of choppy and it doesn't a very smooth flow of words to found the rest.

Perhaps something like: Silence seemed to be the usual sound, no matter where she was.

But that's just a suggestion and of course, feel free to ignore me if you'd like, hehe. (: <33

Regret hung over the old woman like those grey clouds concealing today's bright blue sky.

I liked this line because not only were you describing her mood or standing, you were also commenting about the setting and the weather. Very nice. (: <33

She had such vivid dreams now they are grey and fading into nothing.

This is such a heart breaking line. ): </3

Amazing little piece though it broke my heart, aha. You've got some amazing talent here, dearie. I always love reading your stories.<333 (:

first comment, woo <3!
I like this layout, the greens look good
and it's not overpowering because it has a white backgroudn :)
this might sound weird, but I"m glad it's an old woman
so many stories revolve around young adults and teengaers
I do like this, but it has like a darkness about it
you did a great job of potraying that, that's for sure
great job! :D