Rescue Me - Comments

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WOW WOW WOW AND WOW fantastic! You really have incredible abilities as a writer. Everything is great. Layout, wording, description etc... You really do sound like a professional writer please keep writing more. I recommended this. The only thing I would change is maybe make sarah a bit more likeable, for example, maybe taking out the bit about her about to punch the boy in the face for saying her hair was green. I don't know, that's just my opinion.

Hey dear author, comment swap up threw me to this story of yours which I enjoyed. I liked everything about it but there were a few parts with no flow. Other than that, I liked it and I hope you will finish writing this cause I would love to see it to the end. Xd That's all so um, bye. Xd

Hey dear author, comment swap up threw me to this story of yours which I enjoyed. I liked everything about it but there were a few parts with no flow. Other than that, I liked it and I hope you will finish writing this cause I would love to see it to the end. Xd That's all so um, bye. Xd

So, not trying to sound rude or pushy or anything like that just noticed its been a while since this was updated and I'm trying to clean out all my subscriptions so I'm just wondering if this is still an active story or if its on a hiatus?

Thanks much <3 Kat

Is this still active?

Ugh I'm hating you right now Joel needs his ass kicked so bad I wish she'd just tell her brother or something or Zacky would do something its Prom night we all know what is suppoused to happen on prom.. I don't want it to end will there be a sequel is it over over when you're done?

Much <3 Kat

I just read this whole thing in two days and I must have more I have a feeling Zacky remembers everything she told him doesn't he?

Much <3 Kat

Im in love with this story! <3 please updatE

So, when I first found this story, I was kind of like errrmmmm...... do I really want to read this? I just looked at the summary. Then, I read on... GREAT STORY OHMYGOSH. This is a unique idea, and you have a great writing style. Great job! I also REALLY like the layout :) I'm a huge fan of the moving pictures :)

I really like this story so far. I like your writing style and the way you describe things is different. There are a few spelling and dialogue mistakes, but with a proof-reader or concentrated re-reading yourself, they can easily be sorted, but otherwise, this is great. Keep writing :)

You have a few dialogue mistakes, but that's easily fixed. I like the layout, it's not to out there and it's just right I guess you could say? I don't know. I like the character but I get the feeling in the first chapter that it's jumping all over the place. I like it, and that may just be me xD (: Keep writing, it's a wonderful story.

There's quite a bit of spelling issues, but other than that this is okay. I will defiantly keep reading because it is something good and I like your writing style. But I would recommend having someone edit your work from now on. Or even edit it yourself by reading it aloud before you post it.

When you have dialogue you need comma's at the end of what they are saying. For example, "...but that's me." It should be ""...but that's me," he added...."

This is definitely interesting. I was really confused about the whole form thing though.

I'm not an enormous fan of the way the layout is centered on the left. Something about it just makes the entire thing seem sort of unbalanced.

I like the way you're writing this story. It seems very much like a diary, like someone leaving behind their story as it happens for others to read. I like stories like that because they feel more personal. Your narrator is well rounded.

In the first chapter, I don't really like her. She just seems sort of annoying or maybe... full of herself, like she believes she's above it all. But it's good that you've created someone so real that I can feel that way about her.

This seems like a great story in the first few chapters, keep up the good work!

Well good story babe, you are so talented. Still can't believe Joel though, what a silly thing to do.
Keep it up princess <3

I need an update! I only started reading this story yesterday and I fell in love with it!
Please update! :3 It's amazingly awesome!
And I still can't believe Joel did that to her! :o

OMG I can't believe Joel did that to her. Your story is amazing! Update soon :)

*goes and gets machete* hold on while I go castrate Joel...I feel bad for Sarah and thanks for keeping it in less detail cause I think I would've flipped the shit more.

I liked it makes it more dangerous