Less Than Perfect. - Comments

This is deep. I just love how realistic this is and how it is relatable to everyone. I like how you begin with how she isn't those things, but in the end, it is okay not to be those things. I am in love with this because I felt this way before. You did a wonderful job on this!

You have one mistake in this instead of 'heel', it's heal. That's the only error. Anyways I like when stories or whatnot are based off songs and you did a good job. It was short but it worked a lot, I like the way the sentences are like with 'I'm not the girl. Usually that becomes repetitive but this works. You did a great job. :D

I steal Comment virginity! ; D
That was really good. I sort of connected to the narrator. [:
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