Trophy Eyes. - Comments

Ohh they are doing a bucket list, I was watching The Buried Life earlier today and it reminded me of this (: For some odd reason for the party Alison is throwing, I feel like John is going to do something stupid. I dont know why but I have a feeling.. ;P Anyhow good chapter update soon (:

My name is Marissa and I would like to be a main character in a story with John O'Callaghan! <3
THIS STORY IS LIFE! It sucks that John is such a cocky, drunk, completely mental dude that dumped a great girl but I have high hopes or him!
Burt- that made me laugh. : D
Daisy is so cute! I hope she survives or I'll cry!
UPDATE SOON PLEASE! : )

that was cute
was the second 21 (fall back in love)
supposed to be number one?
i feel like it was since you wrote 21 twice
but i wasn't sure

Okay so I'm kinda curious as to what number 1 is...
I mean I think I know the gist of it, but I feel like it could be a complete twist...
Anywhore, that was sweet<3 and he and Alison need to get back together soon. Kay? Thanks, bye(:
I loved this chapter; now I wanna go write a bucket list.
Write more, por favor?

Fall back in love...with Alison (: Aw, that's so cute ! He really does love her, I think he still does !
Update soon (: Real soon ! I would love to be a character as well. (:

As much as her parents had a big impact on her, they can be over bearing and that's probably getting to Ali!
Like how they were when she was dating Ali three years and how they are pushing her into the direction they want her to be going.
At least John is making an effort to keep sober instead of being drunk all the time.
I love his bucket list:
11. Buy my parents a house.
12. Give my brother money for college.
13. Go back to college.
20. Get married.
21. Have a son and name him Burt.
21. Fall back in love/
Now he realizes the mistake he made by ending things with Ali, because she is the one that changed his life, changed him and now he lost her.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nooooo!! Ali and john belong together!! Please continue ASAP!!!

I love how blunt Daisy is about everything!
The tension between Alison and John is ridiculous.
I love this story though, so so much!can't wait for the next part.

I like it <3

Lovelovelovelove!!!

YEAHHHH B******! I'm so psyched for the next chapter:)

- John's a douche. I feel like bitch slapping him if he doesn't stop being so rude to alison. lmfao ' it's funny to see them bicker tho. I wonder how john will react when he finds out alison has a bf. hmmm. lol great updates!

This story is.. beautiful.
I am romantically obsessed with this story.
More, more, more please. <3

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This is possibly my favorite thing I've everrr read, you're such an amazing writer!

I JUST WANT ALISON AND JOHN TO BE GOOD AGAIN!

Amazingggg! <3 Even though I got the update the same day they finally announce tour dates. *sigh* Oh well. Maybe they'll come here next time.

omg wasnt this awkward.
I mean there was so much tension in the air. I could have smelled it from here.
Alison isnt making any effort to be nice at him, at least he tried to be even if he screwed up a bit at the beginning.
Daisy will be the key to their relationship, I can feel it.

I love this as much as I loved the prequel :)

xxx

Aw, spending the day together, how cute (: Update soon (:

Alison needs to calm down, look at john, and see how beautiful he is. yeah he might be a drunk but hes sooo good with Daisy. and i bet he'll stop being a drunk now that Alison is back in his life. he just missed her and had nothing else.