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  • jordohhh

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    Oh my fucking god, finally! I had to wait three hours until I could actually read this and it was so worth it! Finally, finally!!
    June 27th, 2011 at 12:21pm
  • gabyyyy

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    Omg this chapter is amazing. Can't believe it's almost over (:
    June 27th, 2011 at 12:20pm
  • darthjenner

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    I JUST LOVE THIS :(((((((((((
    June 27th, 2011 at 11:45am
  • BrookieBee37

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    I normally don't comment but I thought why the hell not.
    1.This story was amazing and I'm glad I read it.
    2.Not many stories bring me to tears or actually make me cry but you managed not only sad tears but happy tears as well.
    3.You are an amazing writer and I encourage you to continue on writing.
    and 4.This story made me realize the love I had in front of my face the whole time so I thank you :)
    June 27th, 2011 at 11:05am
  • dancingwithmydemons;

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    Okay, so I apologize for taking so damn long to comment.
    I've been reading and stopping with this story, mostly because I had exams and everything so I have been heaps busy.
    But seriously, this is - well now WAS - my favourite story on this site.
    Especially with the way you wrote it and the characters.
    I fell in love with them all.
    You are a really talented write.
    Which is why now, I will be going over to your other stories and starting those.
    Keep it up.
    :)
    June 27th, 2011 at 10:36am
  • thescenekid

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    All I can say is... effin finally! OH GOSH! Zack is really nice but John is... John... I LOVE IT! I can't believe this is almost over :(
    June 27th, 2011 at 10:22am
  • forever.--

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    This story seriously, literally never fails to impress. Im so looking forward to the next one, I deff think you should post it like...well, preferably now!!!! I started to get semi-sad during the scene with Zack but John's what we've all wanted all along =) PERFECT ending! :-) i definitely see a ton of cute tiny O'Callaghans running around in the near future!! Care to prove me (hopefully!!) right asap?! :))
    June 27th, 2011 at 10:14am
  • JustPretend

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    For the love of all that is good, John and Allison better make it in the future. (:
    June 27th, 2011 at 10:14am
  • sukisumi4ever

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    gahhhhh shes so close to choosing. we are on the cusp of a decition! its the battle between heart and head againg...dont listen to the voices in youre head, listen to your heart! haha see what i did there? i like what you did with the serenading. i know it might seem...cliche at times, but its true, every girls dream. plus, if youre a musician, i feel like youre morally obligated to serenade your love whenevers appropriate. just saying.
    June 27th, 2011 at 04:28am
  • MEEZZY

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    I have to agree with you there, who wouldn't want John O' standing outside your door ready to serenade you?! That is one present I would never turn down :p. I can't wait for the next two! And I'm already subscribed to Lapse, I know it will be worth the wait :]. Pleaaaaaaaaase update soon!!!!

    p.s. your polyvore is adorable!
    June 27th, 2011 at 12:59am
  • lemelime394

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    amazing. john messes up alot ,but i give it to him for never giving up, no matter what. I AM SO SAD THIS IS EMDIMG SOON!
    and i really feel bad for zach, also the checks were why john is having money trouble... DUH. <3
    June 26th, 2011 at 09:05pm
  • lemelime394

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    amazing. john messes up alot ,but i give it to him for never giving up, no matter what. I AM SO SAD THIS IS EMDIMG SOON!
    and i really feel bad for zach, also the checks were why john is having money trouble... DUH. <3
    June 26th, 2011 at 09:05pm
  • BrytNshiny

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    awwwwwwwww i cant believe its almost over
    i freakin love john in this story hes sooooo amazing.
    she better pick him.
    i'm glad Zack saw it all so now he can step back
    June 26th, 2011 at 05:06pm
  • tmdaisy22

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    I knew that he was the one giving the checks! And I would love to be serenaded by John! Great chapter, can't wait for the next one:)
    June 26th, 2011 at 05:05am
  • whilethefirewasout

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    ONLY 2?! I'm so sad this is ending! I feel so bad for Zack because he's already set on spending his life with Alison while she's set on being with him too, but only in her mind and not her heart. John is also obviously set on being with Alison for life, but she's just going with her head! I absolutely loved the whole say hi to Alison and that they need movie nights part. No offense to Zack, but Alison and John belong together. Zack knows it too. I mean, why else would be forbid her from seeing him? It's all because he knows that she still loves John and that John still loves her. And !!!!!!! It was John sending the checks! Where in the world would he get that money anyways? hahahha. I am completely in love with this.
    June 25th, 2011 at 10:22pm
  • revenge_is_mine

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    oh boy i want john o to do stupid shit for me all the time *swoon*
    June 25th, 2011 at 09:14pm
  • megustajawno

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    So, I'm pretty sure you know how I feel about Alison and Zack, but now that John has finally just laid it all out on the line in front of Zack, I'm curious to see how Alison reacts.
    But seriously ONLY 2 MORE CHAPTERS!!!! That's border line depressive, this story is going to be so hard to let go, luckily I'll have a new John story to follow. :D Update soon!? (: <3333
    June 25th, 2011 at 08:50pm
  • erika_xtc

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    Aw, poor Zack :( I've got my fingers crossed that Allison chooses John though ;)
    June 25th, 2011 at 08:49pm
  • Eri.

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    I am so bummed that this story is ending.
    I just started reading this and tech romance like two weeks ago.
    But I fell in love instantly. It is amazing! I can't wait for the new story though(;
    June 25th, 2011 at 07:37pm
  • SpinningInCircles

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    UPDATE(:
    June 25th, 2011 at 05:38pm
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