PLEASE! PLEASE POST MORE! This is a really good story! =D
November 14th, 2011 at 12:37am
I'm Pregnant, He Can't Be My Teacher - Comments
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I must admit to missing the updates on this story. they are good since this story is ssoo amazing. but i have to agree with tigermilk about the identical chapters from two points of view. if you want to do that, which is totally a good idea, you have to switch it up just a bit. you will obviously have the same dialogue, but its better if you have more of his/her thoughts portrayed in the povs. they just turn out better for you to write and for the readres to understand and not misunderstand or get bored with. just a suggestion, hope it helps though!!August 6th, 2011 at 03:55am
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I really like this story! Please update soon!July 12th, 2011 at 09:45pm
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I thought this was an ok story, interesting and original and I have been trying to do some research on other pregnancy stories to help with my own I'm writing. Maybe we could collaborate on pregnancy details since i've never been pregnant and the closest I've come to it is my sister and the topic of my story, my friend Rosalind. :DMarch 27th, 2011 at 08:53am
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I love this. It is so cute! The only thing that I can ask for is longer chapters maybe?March 15th, 2011 at 06:24am
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:( updateeeeeeeee. Longer chapters maybe?? :)March 15th, 2011 at 01:08am
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it's kind of annoying having to read two chapters that are pretty much identical, you should try and expand Dylan's chapter after Cassie's instead of just copy/pasting.March 15th, 2011 at 12:37am
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love it!!!!!!!!!!March 11th, 2011 at 07:56am
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Loving it, can't wait to read more :DMarch 7th, 2011 at 02:50am
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Love(:February 28th, 2011 at 10:58pm
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This story could be so good, but I have a few constructive criticisms.
1) The chapters are so short that I feel like I'm reading a kids book.
2) There are too many spelling and grammatical errors to list in one comment.
3) Save for the last few chapters, all of the even numbered chapters are repeats of the odd numbered ones.
HOWEVER, I'm hoping you two will step up your games and really get this story going!
(sorry if i'm coming off as mean, but I'm trying to give helpful suggestions.)February 28th, 2011 at 09:34am -
this is a good story (; i love it!February 25th, 2011 at 09:41pm
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I like this idea. it's good. The only bad thing is when you guys make them go through the same scene twice from both points of view. I know there are slight changes but maybe you could start the next chapter at the end of the scene before like you did with the last chapter. Otherwise it's actually pretty good. Thumbs up!February 25th, 2011 at 05:50am
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I like it! =)
If you don't mind, check out some of my work!
Preferably Listen to Your Heart or Heart of Glass =)February 25th, 2011 at 05:13am -
Ohhh my. ;)
That'd be awkward though. Having your teacher's child.
Never heard of anything like that before xD
But I really like this story. You should update soon.
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Wow, she needs to chill out on him. ! Its her son but he shouldve been there if he knew he didnt use a condom .February 23rd, 2011 at 04:37am
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I love this (; please update !! And co-writer you too !!February 22nd, 2011 at 03:45am
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I like this! :) I haven't read anything like this before, but I hope you update soon!February 21st, 2011 at 09:59pm
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Good :)February 14th, 2011 at 11:49pm
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I like this story :) keep writing please :DFebruary 10th, 2011 at 08:01am
