This, Dasha, is absolutely lovely. I loved the preview you showed me last night, and this chapter made my jaw drop. The slang you used, the setting...all of it is amazing. It's like I'm there, on that June day in 1967, watching Johnny and Tim. It's like I'm watching some amazing, Oscar-nominated movie in a theater, and that, my friend, is why you're such a talented writer. I loved this to bits, and I can't wait to see the next two chapters. ^_^