I love this story. I do have some constructive criticism though, maybe use a paragraph for each person that talks instead of using one big lump, it makes it difficult to figure out who's speaking. Otherwise, love the plot.
Yay for updates! hehe john is so worried about that title, last night I watched RAW for the first time in years...well i just got to see a part of it, but still it made me want to start watching it again! Great update now I'm all ready for the WWE again
Wondering where the next update is for this story cause i think that Wednesday update is LONG overdue. Great descriptions and can already tell I'm gonna love it.