I like the twist you put in this story with Alice lying in order to keep the baby a secret. It gives a different effect to the story than if he were to find out and either stay with her or leave because he didn't want to take responsibility.
The layout and tone of the story makes me feel like I was reading the lost diary of someone from the middle ages. Obviously you'd have to take out the school, alcohol and everything related to music but it's just the feel the story gives. I really like it and like the other commenter's I believe you should continue on with it. It's off to a great start.
The last two updates were heartbreaking. She's given up so much so he can have a life which is sweet but also kind of stupid because he'll have a child that he'll not know about.
I love the starting of this because it's not like any other teeange love story, it's different and full of raw emotion. We've all had boyfriend's who we've seen as knights in shinning amour and we've all fallen deep in love with someone before only to have something (not a paregnancy in my case) to pop up and break down the relationship.