Harlot - Comments

more pleaseeee?

Layout; The red surprised me. Haha But the background is really interesting and I'm very close to saving it to my computer.

Summary; It was a bit long, but I think it was done well.

Chapters; I love Jimmy Sullivan. :) Anything with him it is automatically good in my books. Though this story is going to be a new favorite. It has a lot of potential.

first comment, woo<3!
I like this layout, none of it is hard to see at all :)
I like how all the guys are telling her what to wear :)
and I think it's cute that Jimmy is just standing there
so, is this girl in teh band? I'm confused about that
I understand she's going on tour with them though
okay, she works for them, question answered!
oh, so she justl ike dances on stage and makes the band look better?
kind of a weird job, but I understand it. and at least teh guys are polite to her :)
I actually really liked this. and the idea was great <3 :)
If I was more in to Avenged Sevenfold, I'd probabaly subscribe :)
I find it endearing that The Rev is in this as well :)