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  • SynnerNoSaint18

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    Loved this story! Cant wait till you post a sequel!
    November 15th, 2011 at 01:05pm
  • secrets-that-die

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    awe i loved it :)
    November 13th, 2011 at 06:19am
  • mistery gurl

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    :( didnt want it to end
    November 10th, 2011 at 07:28am
  • ShadowsFiction

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    Sad faces that it's over. Can't wait until the sequel. And, I can kick you for making my heart stop in the four years later. But, this story is one of my favorites ever.
    November 8th, 2011 at 04:25pm
  • SynysterxSavannah

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    Loved this story<33333
    November 8th, 2011 at 02:54pm
  • mistery gurl

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    hahahahaha loved it!
    October 25th, 2011 at 05:28am
  • ShadowsFiction

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    "Asshole with a heart" as you always say. Bri is right about Jason, he needs to be a kid for as long as he can. So glad that she is opening up to her family. And, is it Cassidy or Cassandra? I saw both of them, so I am not sure anymore.
    October 25th, 2011 at 03:43am
  • SynysterxSavannah

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    loved it<33
    October 24th, 2011 at 08:48pm
  • ShadowsFiction

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    Miss Vengeance, do I have to come to C-Bus and put a boot up your ass? Really? I totally should have expected this but it shocked me and Brian is being too harsh. She's sacred. He's stupid. Great update. Much love.
    August 23rd, 2011 at 09:56pm
  • mistery gurl

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    wow. i didnt think she would run, i hope she feels bad for it now. after what brian did for her the least she could do is go and say hi and hear their side of the story
    August 23rd, 2011 at 07:11am
  • SynysterxSavannah

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    awe :/
    loved it!
    August 23rd, 2011 at 05:24am
  • ladyofsorrows101

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    I really love your story!
    I'm really happy that Jimmy and Adrianne are together.
    They seem to be really happy with each other.
    I'm glad that everyone is happy that Brian and Cassidy are engaged.
    But I wonder how put the envelope on Jason's bed.
    That part felt me thinking about who it could be.
    Can't wait to see if they find out who it is!!!
    July 29th, 2011 at 09:22pm
  • ShadowsFiction

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    Ignore PSYCHOsickness, if anyone knows your writing technique it's Tori and Me. So, we know that you have something planned anyways. Whatever, lol. Anyways, EEP so glad that Jimmy is with Adrianne, so much better than Leana (sorry!). Good times, but I was confused, who put the envelope on Jason's bed?

    Anyways, great chappie lovely. I can't wait to see where it goes and that kind of scares me!
    July 27th, 2011 at 09:44pm
  • SynysterxSavannah

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    awe! loved it! :)
    July 27th, 2011 at 03:00pm
  • mistery gurl

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    loved it :)
    July 27th, 2011 at 11:46am
  • PSYCHOsickness

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    I really like your style of writing but I'm getting a little bored of the story, I guess the prospect of a happy ending just doesnt appeal to me. I would have ended the story when Brian made it out okay, she was put in jail and Brian got custody of her kid. Then write another story that ends happily...leave the people wanting more I always say. :D
    July 27th, 2011 at 09:58am
  • the-quiet-one

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    Chapter 38
    Well, at least they are trying to involve Adrienne in their activies
    As of right now, she seems like a great addition to the group
    Hm, and Jimmy can't help how he feels towards someone
    Especially when he knew before they even broke up that the relationship wasn't going anywhere
    But maybe, even if he feels something for Adrienne, he should probably wait and get to know here more
    Before he even considers something more with her
    But honestly, it may sound bad, but I'm glad that Leana is out now

    Ps. I found one small mistake. “Good luck tomorrow.” Lacey said to Julie. -> you missed the *t* at the end of Juliet's name

    Chapter 39
    She said yes!
    I'm fangirling right now, so gimme a moment
    ....So, now I'm good, hehe
    Well, it was probably for the best that Brian asked Juliet for advice
    Juliet is Cass' best friend and probably the best to ask in this situation
    But they probably should tell the other before the baby shower, cause on a baby shower the mother and the baby are the center of attention

    Ps. The same thing as in the previous chapter. There was one part where you didn't have the *t* at the end of Juliet's name, but I don't know if it was intended this time or not....“I do have a confession, Julie does know I planned on asking.....

    I really can't wait for more
    Hope you update soon :)
    July 17th, 2011 at 08:36pm
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    Yay!!!
    They are great for each other!
    July 16th, 2011 at 03:34pm
  • ladyofsorrows101

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    Yay!!! They are engaged!!!
    I really thought that Cassidy was going to say no.
    She has been hesitant about some aspects of her and Brian's relationship, like moving in.
    I'm really glad that they are happy together.
    Can't wait for the next one!!!
    July 15th, 2011 at 10:58pm
  • SynysterxSavannah

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    i loved it!!!! So cute!
    July 15th, 2011 at 01:12pm