Day of Reckoning - Comments

  • Jobyn

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    Wow, this was very well-written. You could feel the warmth between Sam and Dead despite what's going on around them. I only wish there was more to read..
    February 17th, 2011 at 09:23pm
  • fearful;

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    Lovely work. So short, yet so captivating and gripping. I love Sam and Dean's strong relationship, as if nothing else matters except the two of them. Great job!
    February 10th, 2011 at 12:39pm
  • Eimie

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    Very descriptive, I like it. The way it is wrote goes perfectly with story. Everything was purely perfectly and it was nice and to the point.
    February 9th, 2011 at 11:56pm
  • Roden.

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    Ugh, Sam and Dean <3 I love them both and I really liked how this was written, short and sweet. Dying for something is worth more than dying for nothing.

    If you want to comment a poem of mine or a one-shot, go ahead. This comment wasn't planned, but then I read it and I had to say something.
    February 9th, 2011 at 06:59pm
  • DarkMystique

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    I think that it was written very well. It was quite surprising to me too, because even though it was short it was very gripping. I wish I could've read more already. Also, your grammar/spellings, etc, were perfect, so well done. :)
    February 9th, 2011 at 06:51pm
  • delicate to love

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    But he knows that if he dies then he's dying for his brother, dying for a reason.
    That killed me. It killed me as much as they do in the show when they're all cute with each other.
    UGH, WHY CAN'T DEAN AND SAM BE REAL!?! D:

    Loved it, bb. <3
    February 9th, 2011 at 05:07pm