hi:) Im new but i already love this:) My opinion is to clear the confusion being sent to readers... I respect your style and really admire what your doing but for a teensy bit of critism, dont change the POV from 1st to 3rd to 1st to 3rd again, its really confusing in the long run. Keep up the amazing work because i look forward to more, honestly i think you have what it takes (and hey , im no amazing author myself so fuck me:P:}) Alright, -subscribe- bye for now:D
I loved it and wants moreeeee, I would offer to write, but I really am not that good at writting long chapters yet :/ Hope you find a writter that can measure up :)
Oli is such a babe! I loved how cute gabe was, he cried and that was so non gabe like so hah! Ryan, oh dear lord the boy has screwd up! Love it so much dear, update asap, i'm now going to go hound the stories you just mentioned ;D
Finnaly some sex, oh do not act shocked theresa, you know that im a bit off ;) update soon you hooker!you are so stealling my personality for william ;D and add the rydon too, you owe us all o.o
Fuck that was hot! Duh the oral sex was great, haha im a pervert. Franks so crazy, and gerards just so damn confused! But ya, you should update super soon, both the rydon and gabilliam like you promised >.< asap! then i shall be happy :)