It Was Only Natural. - Comments

hah! simple and I loved it :)

Loved this! :D Drabbles are fun to read as well! :D Sometimes you can get so much in so little, as you well do. It's the way you write it and what words you use. Well done!

Okay, so get out of my life now.

You're going to turn me into one of those slash-obsessed teenage girls with a fetish for drabbles... only me then? Ahaha, seriously though, I love this 'olot' as the kids say these days, (ta, Frank). The repetition of 'it was only natural' had me on the verge of an aneurysm. Why couldn't it be only natural to read at the speed of light; and have you post these damned things at a similar speed, also?!?!?!?!

The rain poured from the clouds, soaking any passerby that were unfortunate enough to be out in the storm. I'm pretty sure this is the only thing in any way, shape or form wrong with it, and I could be wrong. It might just be a local thing I've picked up, because honestly it seems the lines overlap so often these days and I'm double and triple checking everything - shouldn't it be 'was unfortunate' or 'passersby' rather than the singular form? Just me..? :\

Either way, that was entirely forgiven when you brought dreamcast into the mix. Dreamcast! Sweet baby Jesus, I love you for that, regardless of anything and everything else in the world that would otherwise ruin such a tender, loving & caring (see what I did there) relationship. :D

It was only natural that Frank would pause, feeling Mikey's wispy hair brush against his forehead. I have nothing more to say to you, because this says it all.

<3

Okay, so Frikey is some of my favorite MCR slash. <3 So I loved this from the start.
Secondly, uhm, yum. This was freaking perfect. It was awkward and cute and I loved it.
I like the repetition of "It was only natural", and the whole sequence of natural things before they kiss. It's like. ugh. Perfect. Smooth and romantic and soft and careful but not careful.
That "fuck it" line was amazing.
No big gaping grammar mistakes or spelling. <3 As a grammar Nazi, this pleases me.
Anyway. Keep writing! :D

I've never been a real fan of slash, but I liked this :)

Thanks you for the recommendation, I loved and adored this, it was fantastic. :)

The writing was so smooth and lovely and it was nice and romantic but not cheesy or cringey and I just all-over loved it to the point of using multiple co-ordination to describe how I loved it.

Pretty much just gonna go read everything else you have now. :)

I saw 'new Frikey drabble' on the comment that you posted me and immediately came to your page.

Let me just say: I love this.

The 'It was only natural' motif is just... I don't even know, but it makes it sound almost like one of those children's stories that the teacher read the class in first grade (lolololol. Let's just top and have a few lulz at the fact that I just compared slash and children's books). It's got a very rhythmic feel to it, if that makes sense.

I also really like the 'fuck it' line in there. It adds realism.

Just because I'm a grammar nazi, I would like to suggest that you put a comma in between soft and light (so it reads "The storm ended half an hour later and the lights came back, along with Mikey's television, which bathed them in soft, white light." Hail grammar! No other mistakes stuck out to me though.

Thank you for being one of the only people who writes good Frikey <3

I've never been a fan of slash, but I rather enjoyed this.

The title is perfect and the layout was simple and nice. I like how the whole drabble sounded like it was trying to make everything sound innocent and what not, even though it wasn't really. It flowed together nicely and I like the way it ended.

Very lovely (: