"His eyebrows rose and he looked at me like I had grown a third head." - i like this comment cos it makes me think she has two heads to begin with. chapter Mary Was Becoming Everything She Didn’t Want to Be i think
also this is a really great story :) i think i might be halfway through? probably not even that. kudos
This chapter was cute! I couldn't help but "aww". I thought it was really fucking hilarious when Jared bit Ash ahahaha!! XD I can't wait to read more!! ^_^
I've been waiting for an update, and here it is! :D It was good. But maybe a bit.. i dont know how to say it.. but to fast? I hope its just onetime deal with that. I love this story, I just wish you could be more detailed. Dont rush with the chapter. Cant wait till next update! :D -J
also this is a really great story :) i think i might be halfway through? probably not even that. kudos