60 Seconds to Jetlag - Comments

  • HotRanger69

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    "His eyebrows rose and he looked at me like I had grown a third head." - i like this comment cos it makes me think she has two heads to begin with. chapter Mary Was Becoming Everything She Didn’t Want to Be i think

    also this is a really great story :) i think i might be halfway through? probably not even that. kudos
    May 31st, 2011 at 03:29am
  • Jennywho

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    Beautiful chapter. All I can say! (:
    Cant wait till next chapter (:

    -J
    May 10th, 2011 at 10:50pm
  • steady as the stars

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    Oh my God. Jared likes to spoon Tomo. I had a mental image and I laughed for a good three minutes(:
    May 10th, 2011 at 04:16am
  • SpencerG

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    This chapter was cute! I couldn't help but "aww". I thought it was really fucking hilarious when Jared bit Ash ahahaha!! XD
    I can't wait to read more!! ^_^
    May 7th, 2011 at 05:53am
  • Jennywho

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    So cute! And I really hope they stay together! make them stay together :D

    -J
    April 21st, 2011 at 01:49am
  • SpencerG

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    I fucking loved the last chapter! I can't wait to read more!!!! ^_^
    April 16th, 2011 at 04:06am
  • Jennywho

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    Aww, chapter 9 was so cute! Loved it!
    Like I said before, Keep it up! :D

    -J
    April 11th, 2011 at 12:17pm
  • Jennywho

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    Im enjoying this story more now, really do! (:
    Cant wait till chapter 9!
    keep it up, doll!

    -J
    April 6th, 2011 at 08:00pm
  • Jennywho

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    It wasnt rushed. It was a perfect chapter! Really (:
    Keep that up! Because I really like this story, and would love to read more!

    -J
    April 2nd, 2011 at 04:03am
  • Jennywho

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    I've been waiting for an update, and here it is! :D
    It was good. But maybe a bit.. i dont know how to say it.. but to fast?
    I hope its just onetime deal with that. I love this story, I just wish you could be more detailed.
    Dont rush with the chapter.
    Cant wait till next update! :D
    -J
    March 31st, 2011 at 01:16am
  • silverghostkitsune

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    omg wow...great story. I can't wait to read more!!!
    March 13th, 2011 at 07:52pm
  • SorryYourNotAWinner

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    this story is great. Cant wait for the next update
    March 13th, 2011 at 01:20pm
  • Jennywho

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    Lovley story! Cant wait to read more! :D
    -J
    February 22nd, 2011 at 01:54am
  • steady as the stars

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    Cool story! I love how Ash has a her own clothing shop, it's neat.. I can't wait for more!
    February 19th, 2011 at 05:28am