Teacher's Pets - Comments

AshleyJinxxBiersack (100)

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I really do like where this story line is going. I can tell it's gonna be good. And the sex is hot. But please, please, please could you change the way Danny and Oli talk? English people don't talk like that. Some words they sometimes say off slightly, but not like that all the time. DX It's distracting 'cause my eyes automatically ignore it all and it gives me a headache. >-<

July 14th, 2013 at 01:52am

DanniiDisasterr (100)

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I like the story line, but the way they talk gets distracting. And the mis spelled words. Other than that it's amazinggg (:

November 20th, 2011 at 04:53pm

thelionheartedgirl (100)

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Just thought I'd mention that hardly anyone in England actually talks like that xD The way you spelt the words and changed the dialect was really... odd O_O And distracting xD Just saying ^^"

November 17th, 2011 at 09:05am

PurifiedToxicity (100)

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This story is really hot,
I love it.
Your a fantastic writer.

July 18th, 2011 at 07:17am

xXaddicted2sosXx (100)

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I ran across this story when looking for an oli slash and oh god, this story is amazingly sexy lolz.

June 26th, 2011 at 06:05am

AshleySixx (100)

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Nice :D I like this , Updateee !

April 5th, 2011 at 05:27am