Another Night I'm On Another Broken Avenue - Comments

Well best friend, I have already told you this, but I think the story could use more development. I didn't really feel like I got to know either of the characters; it was just a basic telling of a story.
It's a really good start, but I think you could develop this into a longer short story. I would keep it at a short story, though, just because I'm not a fan of dragging out short stories.

You should definitely continue this...I love it so much! It almost made me cry a little bit, honestly

I hope you win!!!

I Love this story and i think you should continue!!!!!! plz write more!